title — appropriate to subject, tone and genre? Does it generate interest, and hint at what your poem's about?
subject — what's the basic situation? Who is talking, and under what circumstances? Try writing a paraphrase to identify any gaps or confusions.
shape — what are you appealing to: intellect or emotions of the reader? What structure(s) have you used — progressions, comparisons, analogies, bald assertions, etc.? Are these aspects satisfyingly integrated? Does structure support content?
tone — what's your attitude to the subject? Is it appropriate to content and audience: assured, flexible, sensitive, etc.?
diction— appropriate and uncontrived, economical, varied and energizing? Do you understand each word properly, its common uses and associations? See if listing the verbs truly pushes the poem along. Are words repeated? Do they set mood, emotional rapport, distance?
personification — striking but persuasive, adds to unity and power?
metaphor and simile — fresh and convincing, combining on many levels?
rhythm and metre — natural, inevitable, integrate poem's structure?
rhyme — fresh, pleasurable, unassuming but supportive?
overall impression — original, honest, coherent, expressive, significant?
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